song writting

thanks for agreeing with me

/me shakes his head in disgust and walks away... muttering to himself and commenting how someone ought to go check him out on YouTube under the name "Swagnilla Ice" and at least he has a fan base already.

knock knock, who's there
it's me Mr. k
the man who apparently doesn't have a say
they say the man with the least to tell
is the man who's about to sell
0 records and say that his stuff is shitting
then he goes around bitching
'bout the fact that my songs are killing him
so what i have to say is
if you hear these rhymes and feel 'em
then there mine
there's always an end to my line
but not an end to my rhyme
tonight i'm gonna shine

[chorus]
this is the time (i'm gonna shine)
i'm spitting these rhymes (i'm gonna shine)
3x
[beat plays for 10 seconds]

[beat stops]

man fuck this beat
i'll go acapella
i'm gonna tell the world
that you have been told
that i have already sold
out all of my songs
while all the girls where throwing there thongs
and all there bras
i don't follow the laws
all you rappers made
last night i got laid

[beat starts again]
no never mind
fuck the raps
i'm don't feel like telling of these guys
here they are
mr.lif, dr.dre,slim, lil wayne, hittman
go hang out with vanila ice, thats where you belong

you peice of shits go around
saying i suck
that i ran out of luck
well i don't give a fuck
after today it's the death of a rapper
who says that he still don't give a fuck
that he's the real slim shady
the one who says he's the demon
who puts Dr. in front of his name
who thinks he's still lil
who says he's a hitman
i'm as crazy as all of them combined
the have already shined
and died
i'm the one who tied
them all up
walked out of the closet and said s'up
to your girl who then sucked my dick
she said it was sick
i'm free styling every verse that i spit
'cause i don't even remember the words to my shit
took a match and lit it
while i sucked a girls tit
burned her to death before i left

[chorus]

this is the time (i'm gonna shine)
i'm spitting these rhymes (i'm gonna shine)
*sound of curtain closing*

[heres a new song for you. tell me what you think]

gangstas go around
talking 'bout guns like i don't got none
what ya think i sold 'em all
'cause i stay well off
now all i get his hate mail saying K fell off
you guys got those mouths
but you don't respond
and just so you all know
i didn't get rich of these songs
i'm walking up to someones house with guns drown
last week some dude walked up to me
he said "hey Mr.K did you hear about Dr.Dre"
Of course i did bitch
i'm the one who shoot him

[chorus]
i met a girl last night (i shot her)
my best friend came over (i shot him)
you come over (i'll kill you all)

Typical rap s***. Always about breaking the d*** law!

[i wrote down some more]

[mr.k]

now don't take this the wrong way
but i really have to say
that i wanna go up to your house
and shoot you all
[beat changes]
i tried suicide once and i'll try it again
that's why i write songs where i die at the end
can i ask one thing
did you forget about me
but i don't see
why i killed that lady
maybe i'll just blame shady

Yep, all about breaking the law... typical rap junk that no one needs to hear or listen to.

no one needs to, but everyone loves to

Said By knightmare

no one needs to, but everyone loves to

Not me dude. Give me some jazz or classical any day over rap.

those are your tastes and rap i his. i peronly like rap and jazz but i hate classical..dont ask me shit bout jazz though i just like the way it sounds, i youtube it bitch.

(aight ima drop sum real quick)

i love the haters just like your mom
wake up in the morn to hear my fire alarm
i might sound crazy but still your lady loves me
so lock her under a key to stop her at my privet party
i play Bf all day so my brain works like a paper weitght
its probely just dead weight
my only option is to be buried alive cause being killed jsut dont suit me
but still i love it when your bitch tut me
and she blew me
a hell she even sucked me, but i dont give a shit so i flip head for all the wishes as i bury all the bitches

any kind of music that expresses someones feelings is the best i wrote my ex girlfriend a song and well it was a good idea

i bought my ex the cutest hat eva made in excistence then she moved -.-, was gonna write her a song much but i said there was time.

sorry bro that sucks i rather have them move away then cheat thats what you get for dating a blonde with big boobs considered the school slut

[i'm gonna continue the song i'm writting]

i walk around on the streets and these bitches go crazy
so when i'm feeling a little lazy
i go give them to shady
and give him a nice, nice lady
i had a little task
so i looked in death's face and took off his mask
let me tell you what this preaty little dames name is cause she's kinda famous
and i hope i don't sound to heinus when i say this
nicki manaj i wana stick my penis in your anus

well she didnt cheat but she did tell me right before she left she was getting back with her ex... and that sucks bro i will put dat in my notes. i hate relationships -.- they are nun but stress without sex.

agreed but as i see it the pain will be worth it

at sum point yes

i drop da ball and i pop it
i take the wad of 50 out of my poket
i spend it on deem cheap hores no more
finaly get a bitch fo real with nice big tits
i dont want to sound bad or nun
but could you please bend over
i dont lesten to what other have to say
i just tell em im fuckin dis bitch so please go away

(just so you know all i'm trying to do is write some songs, and get some feedback)

okay well i dont rap but i let out some of my lyrics its kinda like idk how to describe it..

Loving you will be my end
This feeling may be taking over me
When i see you i cant back away
I try to walk away but it doesnt seem to leave my mind
Why do i run from the truth when all i think about is you
I believe we can make this into something that will last forever.... there is more and i wrote an acousitc guitar part that goes to it

(can i just get feed back on my song)

i lean her genst da cold glass wall and freeze dem nipp
i think ill go in and take me a lil sip
if you feel a lil sick just dont read the rest of this shit
cause im a nasty boy wit more skills den mr.miygi
some guy even tried to put dem suisdels arincari
but to tell you the truth i dont really care
for hells sake i would even walk round in my underware
i know the rest of you niggas dont care
but still i unload a clipp just so i can get dem titz

(can i just get some feed back on the song)

(ohh yo sorry knight i love your lyrics thats the only reason i come back to this over and over agian but like me you rapp bout the typical bullshit, if you rap bout something more close to you it always is better . and sky thats really good)

okay well heres the thing its okayy but the rhythm scheme is all over the place and the penis in the anus part well that kinda gay sounding