Juggernaut (My New Comic Idea)

Billy sheen is an 18 year old boy who has signed up to join the army becouse his grades wouldn't allow him to do much else.becouse there was no war going on he figured it would be an easy way to make a living but unfurtunetly he was hand picked (due to his extremly average skills,and the fact that he had no loved ones except for his mother) along with 4 others, to test out a new machine that sapossedly could change human DNA.the machine actualy worked but then it malfunctioned and blow up the building. and all 4 recruites where blown into diffrent parts of the world (all with diffrent powers).now that north korea, russia, and Iraq have there own super powered weapons (Ironicly created in america) Billy finds that the U.S. wants him to defend the eintire country all on his Own,and all he wanted was an easy life in the service.ow well whats a weapon of mass destruction to do?

Character Names:
Billy sheen-flight,strength,speed,inhanced senses:America
john marrow-power over darkness:north korea
susan clive-control of the elements:soviet union
charlie manson-power to control animals:Iraqi millitary

Damn,that sounds pretty cool.I would read it.

Thanks Once I have a few chapter Typed Up On Office Word,Ill post them here for your recognition and pointers.

Heres is a preview of the first Episode (the complete first chapter including the prologue)

Prologue

Billy Sheen is an 18 year old boy who has signed up to join the army because his grades wouldn't allow him to do much else. Because there was no war going on he figured it would be an easy way to make a living but unfortunately he was handpicked (due to his extremely average skills and the fact that he had no loved ones except for his mother) along with 4 others, to test out a new machine that supposedly could alter human DNA. The machine actually worked but then it malfunctioned and blew up the building. and all 4 recruits where blown into different parts of the world (all with different powers).now that north Korea, Russia, and Iraq have their own super powered weapons (Ironically created in America) Billy finds that the U.S. wants him to defend the entire country all on his Own, and all he wanted was an easy life in the service. Oh well what’s a weapon of mass destruction to do?

Episode 1: Project JK-7

Chapter 1: The Scientist

Billy woke up in the middle of the desert. He looked around trying to remember what had happened, and then he remembered the military project JK-7. He saw a city in the distance, so he squinted to make sure it wasn’t a mirage, immediately it went from a distance to appearing to be right in front of him. He unsquinted his eyes and it was back to being in a distance. “What’s …happening” he said then he decided to go to the city and find a hospital so he took off in a run and he was there in 1 second flat. “What….how?” he said. He looked over and saw a hospital across the street and started walking, not wanting to run into a wall, and as he did a car sped up the street and hit him. As it did the car smashed inward and started tilting forward then fell back down to the ground. The driver quickly got out and looked at Billy with a frightened face and ran off screaming. The mans face reminded him of something, but what, wait wasn’t there a scientist at the project, then it hit him the scientist, if anyone knew what was going on it would be him. He took off running towards the building he had been tested in and stopped at a big pile of rubble. Then he saw the scientist under the debris, Billy pulled him out quickly and laid him on the ground. He checked his heart “good a pulse“he said then slapped him in the face “OWWWWWWW” the scientist said waking up. “What did you do to me!?!?”Screamed Billy, lifting the scientist “hmmmm so it worked. Tell me, have you noticed your senses have heightened a bit, maybe some super speed. No need to tell me about your strength” said the scientist “how did you…”said Billy “please, I’m the one who did this to you. I gave each of you specific powers, and I gave you the most.” The scientist said then Billy put him down gently “so have you tried flying yet?”Said the scientist “I can fly” said Billy “sure can, by the way could you fly me to area 57 I need to report the succession of the Project and the destruction of my machine. Oh I’m Professor Jackson by the way, but you can call me Jack” he said then Billy picked up Jack and jumped into the air and started flying towards the base as swift and beautifully as a drunken seagull.