Darkness rise

I had a dream last night and I really think it is a good story to tell. I may make a role play if people like it enough so please comment about it.

Danny awoke with an intense pain in his neck "Wha... what did you do to me?" he asked horrified because he already knew the answer.
"we have taken the life force of one of the ancients and placed it into your body." a scientist said writing something down on his clip board.
"What did you just write? why did you do this to me? let me go!" he yelled trying despretely to free himself.
"hmm. patient has yet to show any form of ability." the scientist said picking up an electric cattle prod. "time to give you a little more incentive." he said poking danny with it and shocking him
"Ahh! why did you do tha- Ahh STOP IT!" he screamed as the scientist continuely poked him. suddenly danny heard a voice "let me out" it said in a low voice. "let me out so I can stop the pain" he said hissing.
"no, no not you, you didn't put him into me did you?"danny screamed at the scientist through the pain. "he is the worst of them!"
the scientist just kept poking him.
"LET ME OUT NOW! DO YOU WANT TO BE SHOCKED TO DEATH!" he screamed danny shut down his eyes closed and his heart stopped.
"him, a shame, he was the most impressive case yet." the scientist said before a giant black spike came out of dannys back and stabbed the scientist through the stomach. "Thanks for the complement, I am pretty impressive." the dark voice said coming through dannys mouth. he easily broke through the bindings and walked out of the room "Ha, my power is great even within the confines of such mortal flesh as this." he laughed soldiers started shooting at him but the bullets became dark and black as they passed through dannys body and they reversed shooting the soldiers instead. "YOU MORTALS DARE SHOOT AT ME! I AM RAGNAROK!" he screamed a pair of black wings grew out of his back and he flew off away from the base.

2 years earlier.

"yes, yes it's amazing!" danny said happily looking at the thing he had extracted from the stone. "to think our ancestors created a way to...to trap these powerful things in stone." he said. "it's brilliant." he said watching the whisp like creature try to escape the tube it was in.
"you say amazing, I say horrifying." a woman said behind danny. her name was rose valintina and she was one of his prodigies. "come on rose, don't you think it's amazing, these things where said to be god like, they controled nature itself, all aspects of our life that we can not control, they did. then we locked them away in stones so we could live free." danny said.
"yes well, maybe we locked them in for a reason." she said.
"yeah, because they didn't understand them, but we can harnes their energy and create sustainable energy sources, think about it. cars will go forever without gas, planes, trains. houses lit up until the day they are demolished it's so amazing" danny said.
"yeah, it's just to bad the government wouldn't allow it. to much money would be lost. don't you know what this really is? it's a way for the governemtn to make better soldiers." she said
"I am the only one who knows how to extract them from their stones, and the only one who can put them back, I would have to be the one who..." he started but rose interupted. "they have been watching you, they probably have several scientists training to do what you can behind your back." she said.
"well, as long as they keep him in his stone thats fine." danny said pointing to a stone labeled Ragnarok. "he is the ancient of darkness, and of all the ancients he is supossedly the worst." he said.

(cool, it's a good story)

Present
Danny wakes up in a dark cave. a fire had been lit by someone. "wh...where am I?" he asked
"in a cave of curse." a voice said.
"no I mean...you should know what I mean you are part of me." he said.
"I know, I was just having fun." the voice said then a dark figure walked out
"you are an ancient?" danny asked.
"this is what we looked like before you humans locked us into stones, our external bodies grew minds of their own, human minds without any memories of our power. their decedents are the ones you term ancient capsules, the ones who have the ability to take in the soul of an ancient without fear of death. you happen to be a decedent of me, a vary close decedent, the lineage must have been kept close for your body to fill so powerful when I am in control." he said.
"there is no way I am related to ragnarok, you are the ruler of evil." he said.
"not of evil, I am the master of darkness, there is a difference. darkness can exist without evil, in fact I consume evil, it is kind of my thing. you people feared me because I would take the evil from a persons heart, and usually that would kill them." he said "I am not the evil one, you all are, and it is time I started punishing the wicked once more. In fact I did so last night while you where regrettably unconscious." he said
"YOU WHAT!" danny screamed.
"drained the evil from a group of guys, you should have seen them crying for mercy I had forgotten how good it feels."

(Good story)

Danny walks outside the cave and looks around "so, I am the only one right? no one else?" he said
"Ha, you wish. no my brothers have been given human bodies as well, all of which are probably being trained to go after you, since you ran for it." he said and as he did a huge blast of fire came screeching towards danny. Ragnarok jumped into danny and took over, a dark dome appeared around them blocking the fire ball. "so they sent sol? probably thought his fire could light up my darkness." he laughed. "not likely." he said as giant black tenticles flew towards the person and wrapped around him "hello sol." he said.
"Ragnarok, just come quietly" he said.
"yeah right, and let mortals control me like they do you?" he said
"they are not in control of me, I am just letting them believe that." sol said laughing as he caught fire and grabbed dannys body burning it. ragnarok backed up in pain
"DAMN THIS MORTAL COIL!" he screamed.